I agree. Nuts&Gum is a competent writer. And while he assuredly understands the important concepts you so eloquently stated, he did not adhere to them this time around. Incorrect. Sentences (1) and (2) are related. Sentence (3) is offered as an alternative Nuts&Gum would happily take (meaning, he would advocate for it) if they received a good return on a Theriot trade. It is not a continuation of the basic idea of (1) and (2). While it is a logical course of successive thought regarding (1) and (2), (3) does fine standing alone. Sentences (4) and (5) are related to the success of 2010 and beyond without Theriot if the trade in (3) were to happen. I agree. Applying these rules to Nuts&Gum's quote and it should read... His first paragraph challenges the idea that playing Theriot and playing Castro are the only viable options. His second paragraph offers an alternative that he supports. This is why I commented in the first place. I interjected to quell an argument over semantics. It's clear that Nuts&Gum should have used a second paragraph. One of you stopped to read the post, consider it for awhile, and understand it before responding and one of you didn't. I couldn't have said it better myself. Lastly, apologies to Nuts&Gum. I enjoy your posts thoroughly and only critique your writing to illustrate an argument. Please, sir, continue unabashed. This. It is clear as day that Nuts & Gum would gladly trade Theriot if we got a good return on him even though he would then hope to have Blanco or some other scrub be the everyday shortstop and continue to keep Castro developing in minors. I am not in favor of this. Everyone seems to have cast off the Cubs before the season has even started. Seems dumb to me considering we still have a very talented team. Our pitching staff is very good if Lilly can return and there is no way Soriano, Soto and Fontenot are all as woeful as they were last year.